The Untold Story That Directly Relates To Your Holiday Marketing In Four Cash-Sucking Ways…

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The True Tale Of A Famous Red-Nosed Reindeer

As December comes in like a… well… I dunno. I guess we just have that saying for March.

Anyway… December is here and that means so are the holidays. And since we’re marketers… sales-minded folk… people with a buck on the line… the holiday we’re talking about isn’t Channukah or Kwanzaa, it’s…

The mother lode of spending holidays… Christmas.

The chill in the air that paints the red on your cheeks… The scent of nutmeg and cinnamon tickling your nose… And ahhhhh yeah… presents.

But this article isn’t about that jolly fat man. That unshaved intruder who — judging by his diet of whole milk and Christmas cookies — is sporting an LDL of 250 and a blood sugar of nearly twice that…

No… this article isn’t about Santa.

It’s all about the most famous reindeer of all…

(Maestro… an arpeggio please!)

You know Dasher and Dancer…
And Prancer and Vixen.

Comet and Cupid…
And Donner and Blitzen.
But do you recall…
The most famous reindeer of all?

Of course I’m speaking of “Rollo The Red-Nosed Reindeer”.

(Record Scratch Sound Effect)

What the who-nosed huh?

Yep… Rollo was the original name given to that tender piece of venison with the rosy schnoz.

We’ll get into that whole name thing in just a second but first let me assure you this has everything to do with your marketing this holiday season.

You see… unlike so many of the holiday fables we hold so dear, the story of “Rudolph The Red-Nosed Reindeer” is not some age-old tale with European roots, passed down for centuries and spread to every corner of the earth.

We trace this story’s humble beginnings not to Austria or Italy… Britain or France. Not even to the North Pole itself.

That red-nosed reindeer was born in Chicago… in 1939. His pappy… a 34 year old copywriter named Robert L. May.

Yes… a copywriter.

Now you see where I’m going, don’t ya?

May wrote this story for the now defunct Montgomery Ward Department Store chain.

A small chain compared to giants like Sears and JC Penney, but  sometimes little Montgomery Ward would beat their much larger competitors to the holiday dollars. And they usually did it with free giveaways.

For years the Montgomery Ward marketing department would buy coloring books and give them away to kids while their parents shopped. The freebie would make the kids happy which would make many moms return every year to the store for their Christmas shopping.

1939 was the year May’s boss came up with the idea to put out an original storybook instead of buying standard coloring books.

He figured if they could write the book in-house they would save money and also have something that would be uniquely Montgomery Ward’s. So he asked the young copywriter to take on the project.

From the start, May felt it was important to create a main character all kids could relate to.

For this he drew from his own childhood memories of being small, shy and quiet. All he wanted to do was to fit in… be part of the group. But kids can be so cruel  to someone who’s different.

It was this feeling of wanting to belong… that May knew kids would sympathize with.

Now May was just an ad man, not a children’s book writer. He really didn’t have the skills to create a multi-dimensional story from scratch, so he looked for inspiration. Something to model his story after.

After much trial and error he settled on the Hans Christian Andersen classic “The Ugly Duckling.” The ostracized misfit who ultimately emerges an heroic character.

May figured that was the perfect story for Rollo.

Okay, there’s that name again… Rollo.

You see… May wanted readers to remember the name of his lead character. So he employed a little writing trick called alliteration. That’s where you name the character with the same first letter as the descriptor. A bunny named Bugs. A mouse named Mickey. A Reindeer named Rollo…

At least that was May’s first shot at it. “Rollo The Red-Nosed Reindeer.”

But… he thought Rollo was too cheerful and light a name for a lead character who struggled so much in the story.

So Rollo begat Randy which begat Reggie and so on and so on. May and other Montgomery Ward employees would run the names by their children to get their take on it. After all… if kids are the target then that’s who the name should appeal to.

Finally after going through every “R” he could think of,  the perfect one was found… Rudolph. “Rudolph The Red-Nosed Reindeer”.

He had the classic story to model… the perfect name. You’d think it was smooth sailing from there, but nope…

May’s bosses hated the hook!

They felt the red nose was too associated with being drunk and had no place in what was supposed to be an up-beat holiday story for children. May tried all he could to convince them otherwise but the bosses minds were made up.

That was until May grabbed an illustrator and spent a day at the Lincoln Park Zoo sketching the newborn deer.

The drawings did the trick and the story was finally approved.

The rest is as they say… history. With books, songs, cartoons, movies and merchandising, ultimately hundreds of millions were made off the back of this little ageless fawn we all love.

So… did you pick up on the marketing lessons contained in this article?

Here’s something fun to try… Go back. Read this again. And see if you can locate the four real-world marketing lessons.

Then come back and continue reading below.

Okay Vin…  hit me with the marketing lessons hidden in this true story.

1.   To begin with we learned that giving your customers something free is a great way to build loyalty because people like people who give them free stuff. More than that, giving gifts to your prospects instills the feeling of reciprocity. Gift them with something and they feel they owe you something in return (a future purchase perhaps?).

There is never a better time to use this tactic than in the holiday season. The season itself gives you a great reason for the gift.

2.   Next we learned that when you aren’t an expert at something, it’s great to model someone who is, just like May was not a children’s story writer, so he modeled his story on a story written by one of the top children’s authors of all time… Hans Christian Andersen.

All great copywriters keep a file of successful promotions. For some it’s a “swipe file” they write directly from. For others like me, it’s more an “inspiration file” that we use to spark our own ideas. Either way, having a starting point for your marketing communications is one of the best ways to bypass major mistakes.

3.   The loss of the original name “Rollo” teaches us two mini-lessons. First is to always test your campaigns to see what’s working and what’s not working. One little tweak can mean tons more money in your pocket.

Second we learned about the power of alliteration in your writing. Using these types of word tricks can, in some instances go a long way to build familiarity. Put simply, people remember alliterations. Ever heard of Roto-Rooter? Now… what’s the second most famous drain cleaning company? No idea? That’s my point.

4.   Finally… We learned that sometimes the written word isn’t enough to get the idea across. Sometimes your point can be made much more clearly… much more easily with a picture. May wasn’t able to sell his bosses on the story until that illustrator delivered that very cute drawing. After seeing that precious little guy with the big red nose how could anyone be thinking of drunks?

This relates to your marketing in a simple and direct way. Use visuals to make points. That may seem like something that doesn’t even need to be said but you’d be surprised. There’s an entire school of thought on copywriting that completely discounts the importance of visuals. I fall into the other category. I always use visual elements in my copy. And some of the most successful sales letters I’ve written have been extremely visual.

I hope you enjoyed this little tale. It’s one of my favorites and one that obviously goes down best this time of year.

Take a moment and comment on this article. It helps me to know people are actually reading it. Tell me you hated it or loved it, I don’t care. Just talk back.

Or even better… add any holiday marketing/copywriting stories you know about.

Normally… this would be where I’d wish you a happy holidays and tell you I’ll see you next year. After all… this is a busy month, not just for business… but for people. But…

I will be seeing you again… at least 1 more time before the holiday. Because I have another little Holiday ditty I put together. I think you’ll get a kick out of it (along with 12 great marketing tactics – hint hint).

I also want to take the opportunity to let you know now is the time to sign up for updates to the Clambake, in case you haven’t yet. The reason is I’ve got a brand new marketing/copywriting tool I’m releasing hopefully before the month is out… and everyone who subscribes is going to get it FREE!

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And remember to comment. This place is no fun without you.

That’s my story… till next time… ho ho ho.

Comments on The Untold Story That Directly Relates To Your Holiday Marketing In Four Cash-Sucking Ways…

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December 4, 2010

Ross Bowring @ 3:03 pm #

What a beautifully seasonal interruption to my writing day. And how you found time to write it in-between eighteen hour stints as Bad Santa at the local mall, I’ll never know.

— Ross

Great article.

It’s amazing how many cool stories can be written about from marketing history.

On point 4 – Why do you think certain groups are so against pictures? It baffles me. Even someone like Robert Collier who thought that the letter did most of the legwork, stressed that the flyer and order form that went along with it had a major part in the package. His formula was headline and illustrations on the flyer and then separately the letter stressed one appeal.

But when modern direct marketers like Gary Halbert brought the “letter” methods of Collier into the 20th century they seemed to have left this bit of info out.

Question – I noticed you have drop-shadows on many of your graphics (particularly fonts) – does that test better than font graphics without drop-shadows? I ask because I personally find it hard to read the fonts with the drop-shadows.

Correction: Mean to say “late 20th century”

trease @ 5:06 pm #

I thoroughly enjoyed the blog post and your writing style on this one. This sounds more like the Vin I first met in a land, far, far away… Your writing is always good, but this one was extra special. It felt more relaxed and more free flowing. I really like the humor.

And the marketing lessons are invaluable. You told us a story to illustrate your point the way May illustrated his story with drawings. I’ll remember the lessons better too. I’ll recall the story and remember the lessons. Split testing, survey the audience, get past the gate keepers and free stuff. That’s good.

The free stuff is part of the offer, at least in my mind. And calling in the experts or being inspired by them is good too. A story is great, but a story with illustrations… it fixes the story more solidly in my minds eye.

I often use photos to help with my writing. My mind often forgets little details the photo has, details that make all the difference. I use photos and words with my blogs, but in my columns, I only can rely on words. But I do my best to etch pictures with my words.

I’m a marketer of sorts. I was hired to do my part on my day of the column to draw in more readers. If there’s more readers, there’s more ads. More ads increase the chance someone’s going to buy the products advertised.

Also I have increased business for some of the places I write about. And I’ve had responses for some of the causes I’ve written about. I’m a marketer with a column. My best columns are when I have a good story to tell. And since they’re local stories, my audience is highly interested.

I love this time of year. And Vin, this is your best story yet.

Barry @ 8:10 pm #

Hey Vin, my brain is already starting to shut down and go into holiday mode. So I hope you’ll forgive me for not concentrating fully on the marketing and copywriting aspects of your story, but instead enjoying it for leading into the holiday season. And I did enjoy it.

Let me add to the Rudy atmosphere with this:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9jwcqNVZ6MM

These guys are incredible. All done in someone’s living room.

December 5, 2010

Daniel Scott @ 3:07 am #

I think the great part is May did exactly what good copywriters do…

…he created a story using a “hero” we can relate to… someone who shares in our struggles and frustrations.

It’s a technique I use in a lot of letters… something I learned from you, I think.

And I think it’s a big reason as to why our letters usually do so well.

Just another little marketing lesson that wasn’t expressly mentioned. There’s probably a lot more, but this one struck me pretty hard.

And of course… as usual… the post itself is a big lesson in captivating writing (which any copywriter needs to know).

Hans Klein @ 9:47 am #

I enjoyed the trip back to the old days of marketing… surprisingly timely for today. The story of Rudolph was new to me. Hope you’ll dig-up some more stories from long gone marketing days. When you read the copywriting classics, the old stories of how ads were created are always the most interesting/informative. The lessons stick with you for some reason or another.

Kevin Rogers @ 10:38 am #

Primo post, Vin. Makes me want to put on a cashmere sweater and hug elves (actually, that urge is persists yearround.)

Seriously, excellent writing and insight as always. I’ll be sharing this one.

Merry Christmas,
Kev

Alex @ 10:52 am #

The story also illustrates the value of coming up with a big idea. Like Popeil’s Veg-O-Matic, Halbert’s Family Crest, or Grossman’s Ant Farm.

Alex

December 6, 2010

David Babineau @ 2:18 am #

Great story/lesson Vin. Didn’t know the history behind Rudolph. Funny, I was in Chicago last weekend and we actually saw some of the old Montgomery Ward buildings…

Cheers / Happy Holidays,
Dave

December 7, 2010

Many thanks for this storyline Vin, the first article I’ve read here. It gave me an insight into the much more human and down to earth part of you and further inspires me to continue reading and recommending this site to others to learn from.

May you enjoy a great holiday season.

Best regards,

Mark

Pedro @ 11:04 am #

Fascinating post as always.

Only problem with this time of year is the damn flu that spreads around. I have it right now which may explain my hallucinations… Big Vin Montello talking about cute woodland creatures? Cashmere Kevin Rogers hugging elves?

I need a lie down…

Hey, thanks for the seasonal blogging Vin, and for giving us all a useful “Did you know?..” festive story with the Rollo tale!

Cheers, Pete

December 8, 2010

Eric Barton @ 12:33 pm #

Great post. I found this story online Vin and thought this can be a good lesson…
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The History of Santa Claus and the Red Coat

In a recent survey 76% of Americans believed that Coca-Cola was responsible for creating Santa’s red coat. However, this is an urban myth.

Haddon Sundblom did indeed create an iconic Santa Claus for Coca-Cola. Each Christmas from 1931 to the 1960s Sundblom created his distinctive version of Santa. The marketing logic was simple, Coca-Cola wanted to make sure that it had its share of the lucrative Christmas soft drinks market. ”
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I think one huge lesson I took from Coca-Cola on this and that any of us can use easily Vin is using…

Association as they did. They took a character or thing that is known, respected, and that gives strong emotions and linked it to their product.

They all of a sudden became part of the holidays by using something already strongly linked in all of our minds. They could of started building their association from scratch but took the smart and fast way and took something already there and linked it to them instantly.

December 18, 2010

Al Henderson @ 12:39 am #

GREAT article, Vin. I too had been totally ignorant of Rudolph’s origins. (I fact, I thought the song had come first. *sigh*)

Well I dare say, Vin, with this post…

“You’ll go down in his…TOH…ry!”

Merry Christmas to ya, Big Guy.

- Al

P.S. – Is that the “Trease” from the days of a certain “restaurant letter”?

January 10, 2011

found your site on del.icio.us today and really liked it.. i bookmarked it and will be back to check it out some more later

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